I like this font overall but I think some of the choices are unusual, especially 雨. 人 could be A, 力 or 月 for D, 王 could be E, I would've done 下 for F, 石 could be G, 万 could be H, 心 could be J, 雨 seems more appropriate for M especially since m looks like a simplified version of 雨, 乙 could be Z
Here's a Chinese version. Some of the characters are also used in Japanese
Here's the full 'alphabet'
This is Just an opinion.